Confessions
re rantalicious
i agree with everything you said but why write in such a pompous style?
by the time i reached the end of a sentence i forgot how it began.
it is not the words you use, but how you use them, and how you weave them into sentences that makes your ad unenjoyable to read.
you write as if you want to cram all your intellectual knowledge into each long tiresome sentence.
after every paragraph i struggled through, i wanted to abandon reading. only the content kept me glued.
the way you express yourself....it is difficult to read........overcomplicated sentences...it's like driving an old trashy car in a hard terrain. a struggle....a bumpy ride...
simplify your style and it will be more pleasant to read.
otherwise you are all right.
kind regards.
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